Just One More Pack

I thought that you liked it

when we kissed,

even though I smoke?

 

The taste of nicotine

on my tongue

sticks in your mouth.

 

My teeth are covered black,

thick with tar

and never clean.

 

Now you have packed me in

and I’m alone

with my pack of cigarettes.

 

 

This is part of the Weekly Writing Challenge: Fifty, the link follows.

http://dailypost.wordpress.com/2014/04/07/writing-challenge-fifty/

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20 Responses to Just One More Pack

  1. jazzytower says:

    I’ve been trying to get my daughter to quit smoking, I think I’ll show her this one.
    http://thoughtsandentanglements.wordpress.com/2014/04/08/weekly-writing-challenge-fifty/

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